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dear, Make sure to take your paper to a Ph.D. student at the writing center or English department who can help you with the editing.
This is a research paper, but not literature review. Remember, we talked about it in class. I did have a chance to review your paper and I had difficulties understanding the overall nature of your paper. The literature review must follow certain guidelines such as:
An overview of the subject, issue or theory under consideration, along with the objectives of the literature review
Division of works under review into categories (e.g. those in support of a particular position, those against, and those offering alternative theses entirely)
Explanation of how each work is similar to and how it varies from the others
Conclusions as to which pieces are best considered in their argument, are most convincing of their opinions, and make the greatest contribution to the understanding and development of their area of research
I hope that helps